Melody and the Pier to Forever: Book Three: Parts One and Two | Work in Progress

Parts One and Two
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At the hands of Harry Chin, Melody Singleton and Yaeko Mitsaki died. Those who witnessed the murder, or those who didn't but are in the know, are convinced: the Revolution is over. Necrolius has won.

But ... is it?

Read on!

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Author's notes: It looks as though the entire novel, once it has been completed, will rival Book One for size, if not eclipse it. The two parts on offer here exceed 130K words, with--probably--three more parts coming.

Some of my very best writing is on offer here. I have fallen in love with this Book, and am in no itchin' hurry to finish it. I hope you feel the same way.

Some cautions are important to note:

• This story is very roughly edited to this point. When I finally get to the deep edits, almost certainly a few plot points will change. Not to worry: I'm pretty confident that what I've got on offer here is pretty true to the story. If anything changes, it's unlikely to be major.
• Please forgive grammar, pacing, or tone issues. They will be polished away in the deep edits.
• The cover will change for the full novel; and there are more illustrations coming, too.

Feedback and comments are deeply appreciated.

Now--get reading!

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Please note: absolutely no AI was utilized in the creation of this content.